So I finally developed the courage to post a short story I have been working on for a while. I wanted to post it as romance/horror, but... yeah... so I decided on horror. I'm hoping to get some constructive criticism from anyone who reads it, because I know I need a little work on my writing style. But please, no idiotic criticism to try to get a laugh out of people, or to troll, that means you Cobalt Array. I know the title isn't anything special, but I couldn't think of anything appropriate. I based it off of my interpretation of Silent Hill, and I wrote it with fans in mind, but I also tried to write it for people who are not familiar wit